Engrish Interesting style, but the story sucked.
"Butler shoots master in pool." Yawn.
I voted "Nothing too new or interesting," but actually, the way the butler was drawn looked kinda cool, with the shine on his suit and such. If only the animation had told a story that was actually interesting to me in some way, I might have scored this higher.
The formula for a good first flash is 3+ minutes in length NOT due to a long intro or slowly displaying text, consistant art, and a plot that requires at least a short paragraph to explain.
Hopefully, the artist will do something longer in the future. He shows some promise.
