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[Defense of Mochiads]

Not a defense game. No ads. Otherwise fine.

This is a solid effort from an up-and-coming flash developer. It's not really a defense game. It's more of a side-scrolling shooter with advancement elements taken from MMORPGs. The gameplay works well, mechanically, though there is still room for improvement.

The only real glitch I could see was with the health bar. It was larger than the frame for it and I couldn't die. I assume the health is expressed as an integer, game tried to subtract a higher number from the health than was there, it went lower than zero, and as a result the integer value wrapped around to the highest possible value and now I can't be killed. Try expressing the health as an integer that can include negative numbers, and instead of

if (health==0){ gameOver();)

use

if(health <= 0){ health = 0; gameOver(); }

That should prevent that kind of problem from re-occurring, if it's caused by what I think it is.

Overall, this is a solid early effort. I'd like to see enemies that do different things based on their appearance, difficulty that advances automatically, more stuff going on at once (good things to collect, not just bad things to avoid,) more levels, bosses, and generally more content. Also, it's a good idea not to split up the control between the keyboard and mouse if the keyboard already uses two hands.

This is great for an early game, though. We all start with tutorials. I look forward to seeing what Sparkplug90 brings us in the future as he hones his craft.

Sparkplug90 responds:

thx for the help i found the issue and i fixed it please try the game now

[Grey-Matter]

An incredible game, but ill-suited to this format.

This game wants to be on Xbox Live. Unfortunately, I'm accessing it from a mac, so not even FlashJoystick can help me. (My Nyko airflow was a bust, too.) I tried playing it a bit with the arrow keys, but even with judicious use of the shift key, it's just not happening for me. You absolutely *need* an analogue stick to make these kinds of precision turns.

That aside, this game is incredible. Surprisingly evocative techno music (Is this techno? Is it even legal for techno to BE evocative...?) heightens the mood in the void left by grey geometric visuals. Enemies are diverse and plentiful. Advancement happens at a breakneck pace, sometimes to a fault.

The most obvious thing this game brings to the table is the "ram the enemies" play mechanics. I don't know if I'd call it an anti-shooter. In my mind, an anti-shooter would involve collecting all the bullets, or perhaps managing an armada of weak enemies as they try to wipe out one powerful attacking ship. Maybe a better term would be a-shooter? A ram-'em up? I dunno. But anyway, your objective is simple, to ram the enemies before they can fire at you, or sometimes to dodge around their always-engaged natural defenses in order to hit them. There's probably a fine art to using boosts and slows that I was unable to master with the 4-direction movement offered by my keyboard. As far as I was able to progress, I found the game constantly dishing out new enemy types with new hazards.

And let's talk about progression. When you die, you cook off every enemy and bullet on the screen, an interesting choice, but due to the amount of skill involved in this game, it seems fair, almost compensating for your loss of a precious life by letting you skip to the next wave.

The star of the show has got to be the innovative "Trinity attack." Like everything else, I always had trouble zeroing in on an enemy using only the arrow keys. I'd often miss the enemy I was trying to tag, or else blast through two enemies at once, making a really narrow triangle for myself. But when it did work, it was incredibly satisfying, and I could see enjoying it very much with an analog stick.

I can't speak to the length, difficulty curve, character progression, or endgame, because I didn't make it that far. But this game has all the earmarks of being an instant classic. If only there were a way to release this game on XBLA. Oh, hey, there's that Wii console. That has an analog stick, doesn't it? Maybe you could look into that.

It's awesome to see a game this fresh on Newgrounds, but at the same time, it really doesn't play to the strengths of Flash (and the web) as a platform. This game desperately wants to live on a console, where EVERYONE has an analog stick and EVERYONE uses the same hardware and operating system.

Thanks for bringing us this gem, Bluebaby. I wasn't able to enjoy it as it was intended to be, but I know quality when I see it. I have a sneaking suspicion that I am missing out on a damn good game.

[Warzone Tower Defense]

Very interesting, solid, deep TDG. Needs an end.

I liked this game a lot. It's still not my favorite turret defense game, but it's among my top 5. What I liked most was probably the combination of small tile size, generous unit ranges, and large, diverse maps. I had to restart a few times because the game DOESN'T LET YOU READ THE UNIT DESCRIPTIONS before you build your defenses for the first time, but the units themselves are very simple and straightforward.

Once you notice the similarities to Xeno Tactic, you'll figure out that five seconds is plenty of time to throw down some walls and a couple of machine guns and start building the winding intestinal path-of-most-resistance from the last ground unit's spawn point to your base.

The difficulty curve here is impeccable. Early stages are hard if you just build a few isolated turrets, but become very easy once you get a strategic maze up and running. Each unit has its own tactical advantages, and upgrading is costly, but efficient enough to be worthwhile. (Twice the damage for less than twice the price!) Enemy units get stronger with each wave, including some very powerful bosses, but the increase is so gradual and steady that you never actually experience a "that's not fair!" moment until somewhere around level 120 (my, time flies!) when the gradually-growing armored column finally starts making progress through your maze faster than your defenses can dish out punishment.

And that's the ultimate flaw in this game. You're fighting the tide. You can't win, ever, no matter how long you play. Worse, it's raw statistics, not skill, that dictates how far along any player can get before eventually being overtaken. Pretty much anyone can get to wave 100, and literally no one can make it much further than that. The tools you have to work with simply do not provide for that possibility.

At least Xeno Tactic (and, for that matter, Desktop Tower Defense) gave you a goal, even if that goal was completely unreachable except through the most fiddly borderline-cheating maze-manipulation and the one specific build order that would net you enough profit to afford enough air defenses to wipe out that final wave of super-fighters. In this game, there's no bullshit final wave weeding out all but the most anal-retentive defenders, but there's also no goal, period. I would have liked to see an endgame. "See how far you can get" is best reserved as a personal, optional goal for players who have achieved everything else the game has to offer. It should not be the game's only goal.

That aside, this game had a lot to offer. I loved the quick gameplay, long unit ranges, and incredibly diverse number of possible build combinations. I would have liked to see some more upgrade options, but more than anything this game needs some Achievements. Victory at level 100 on the first map unlocks the second map. Maybe tack on a story mode.

To the author: even if it's just a little "Congratulations, you won!" pop-up when you hit level 100, that still goes a long way towards making the game as a whole feel more satisfying.

See also: Bloons Tower Defense 3 for a case study in adding level-specific win states to an otherwise simple TDG, or Gemcraft for a great example of how meta-gaming goals such as Achievements and Player-Managed Risk can make score-maximization much more rewarding than just mere survival.

Thanks for a well-designed Turret Defense game. If only I had a reason to keep playing it!

[Aether]

Totally worth the obscure learning curve.

A game was submitted
where nothing quite fitted,
into the game industry mold.

And although the logo
did boast pixel mojo,
I was kind of dropped into it cold.

For even though these
mouse-gestures and keys
were familiar and easily used,

By degrees and fractions,
the game's interactions
left this newbie player confused.

My only invectives
involved quest objectives
which at times did seem quite obscure

Although this game's sleek,
Excessive mystique
can cause a game's focus to blur.

Or such was my thinking
my heart sadly sinking
as I questioned each NPC.

My mouse set to clicking,
My monster, clouds licking--
I thought that I needed a key!

For I had been trained
by previous games
to care for them more than I aught.

And though it was boring,
I kept on exploring,
with my gastro-cosmonaut,

I needn't have troubled
with all those text bubbles,
because at the height of my swearing,

I learned there's no worries
about rock backstories--
They are nothing more than red herrings!

Each talkative rock,
whether happy or sad,
is just part of the backdrop!
When I learned, I was glad.

Like most button-hunts,
this puzzle's mechanical.
Once you learn all the stunts,
it's much less tyrannical.

I started to sneer
and soon swelled with pride,
for I'd learned to steer
My Lovecraftian ride.

It's about licking, mostly:
Moons, crystals, and blobs.
A Cthulhu-esque Yoshi
meets Calvin and Hobbes.

This game's quirky fun,
novel and mind-bending.
And nothing and no one
prepared me for that ending!

So this game earns my ten.
'Tis a romp without equal!
Now I lay down my pen...
to dream of a sequel.

Bluebaby responds:

Best review Evar!
Gold star!

[My new room 2]

Scene creators are dull... why not make it a game?

I was impressed by the sheer amount of content and customizability, but I would have liked to see more interactivity. How about pets that move around on their own? And interact with stuff in their environment?

All you really need to do is add some goals, and this could become a game. You know, something like Viva Piñata.

Basically, once you add something to the room, it should do something. I liked how the dogs barked if you clicked on them, but it could have gone much deeper than that. I'm not saying it has to go as far as a tamagotchi, where the pet poops all the time and can die if you don't feed him, but some semblance of autonomy would be nice. Inanimate objects such as furniture could have stats you could do stuff when you click on them, or maybe give you some kinda "style bonus" if you coordinate the room well. Or have objects that, when combined, interact with each other. Maybe when you combine a TV with a VCR, they level up into a home entertainment system.

I dunno, I'm just tossing out ideas, here. My point is, I like my games to have a goal, even if there's no direct impetus to achieve that goal. A game doesn't need to contain violence to be entertaining, but I do expect some form of interactivity.

It's great that you've taken a paper doll and ported it to the computer. But why stop there? Interactivity is much less difficult to add to a game than additional content. Just a few click events... a few checks when dropping an item to see if a corresponding item already exists... some booleans to track flags long-term, and maybe an integer to display a score or money or some other metric of player progress.

I realize it was never your intention to create a game, but this is SO CLOSE. Seriously. You've got tons of content here. Take the extra step and make it interactive. Or at least add a chat client (much harder to do!) so other players can see your creations.

[Shadez: Black Operations]

Airstrikes are a pain in the ass to control.

Another war game where units advance from left to right across a 2D field. This version features modern military units, which means that among other things, almost everyone has a ranged attack and moves slower than they can shoot. This actually leads to a strategically deep game... or it would, if the interface didn't get in the way of airstrikes.

You see, every time you launch an airstrike (something you will need to do constantly at the start of all later levels in order to protect your troops,) it switches back to the unit build menu for no apparent reason. This means you need four clicks to launch your next missile (airstrike menu, build missile, fire missile, select target.) when really one or two clicks would suffice if it locked on to the nearest target, started building your next missile automatically, and it stayed on the airstrike menu until the player decided to change it.

Apaches seem to serve no purpose except to attract enemy AA gun fire, unless you have a fortune to spend on ground bombardment. I guess the developer expects me to just keep spamming troops as my old ones die, but that's always felt wrong to me. This game gives you a slim fighting chance of protecting your units, but then immediately takes it away again with an interface that, for some reason, really wants me to distract me from micromanaging my anti-air missiles so I can build tanks in the middle of a fight.

The graphics and ambiance are good, and the gameplay has potential, but the menu glitch really ruins it for me. Maybe I'm doing it wrong. Maybe I was expected to build apaches to take care of the kamikaze planes for me, and maybe you're supposed to drop a hundred g's for a Shock & Awe bombardment at the start of every mission. (Which my gut tells me is a good way to run out of money over time.) I honestly don't feel like starting all over again just to find out.

Fix the menu glitch so I feel like I'm in charge of deciding when it's time to build units and when it's time to call in airstrikes. Then we can talk.

[Mech Slayer]

"I LOVE IT!"

This is an especially solid shmup hybrid, not unlike Smash TV.

The control is excellent, and the enemies and their projectiles move slow enough that you really feel in control. All of the weapons are quick and responsive. This isn't one of those games where the sniper rifle takes so long to reload you can never use it, and there's no need to worry about splash dammage from your own rockets.

You will occasionally go after some money and get pinned down, forcing you to take a hit, but thankfully you have enough health to act as a buffer.

I thought that the shop between levels was kind of a letdown. Basically because there's no real choice. You always just buy the next thing on the list. There is never any reason to do otherwise. Also, I would have liked to see max HP powerups for sale in the shop, not just healing. A good shop lets the player restructure their abilities to suit their play-style. This shop just felt tacked-on. They could have just given you a new gun every 2 levels and the result would have been the same, so the shop is kinda a red herring.

I got as far as the second boss, and then I died instantly because there's no obvious charge-up before the beam attack comes out. I don't really feel motivated to try again, because I know there's nothing I could have done differently, shop-wise, to improve the odds. I just happened to be standing on the left when the stage before the boss ended, and immediately after the fight started, I got raped by the beam attack. Two hits was all it took to take me from full health to dead, and I certainly didn't have any chance to study the boss's attack patterns or learn from my mistakes. Lack of any continue feature means your first mistake will be your last. Or more accurately, the first enemy you encounter with an attack that can hit you quickly, cover a huge area, and do a lot of damage, represents a bottleneck where the difficulty spikes and the penalty for making a mistake suddenly goes from a little health to all your progress.

Up until that one boss with the instant-death beam attack, it's a perfectly solid game. For all I know, it might resume being a solid game afterwards. But I have no desire to do it all over again just to find out.

It would also be nice to see a variety of rooms, or even scrolling levels for the player to explore. maybe some health power-ups so it doesn't come down to a choice between buying health or buying a new weapon, both of which feel necessary after each wave.

I did like the mecha designs and the graphics. The strangely silent intro animation, while impressive, felt overwrought and kinda pretentious for such a simple little game. Overall, it's a great but simple game that could have been incredible if it were a little deeper and the difficulty didn't spike in the middle like that.

xdragonx10 responds:

Thanks for the really in-depth review, I'll form a proper reply later.

[Infection Game]

Incredible game, except there's no skill involved.

Okay, this game had a lot going for it. Decent graphics & sound. An incredibly efficient (I'm guessing Bitmap-only) engine. Tons of stuff happening at once with no slowdown. Delightful emergant behaviors (try firing the laser after using the triple ship powerup for a poor-man's bomb!) and seemingly unlimited waves of gradually-increasing difficulty. Yet it never quite seems to become unbeatable.

So what's the problem? By level 50 or so the game has already accelerated to the point where seeing what's going on, thinking, planning, and reacting just isn't humanly possible. There's no gameplay, after that point, except holding down the rotate button, keeping three ships active at all times, and spamming the special attacks.

Soon after that, the various powerups are appearing and disappearing so rapidly that the only thing you can do is mash the 1-7 keys indefinitely.

I do like the fact that the game was able to keep going forever. I finally quit after level 700, and today's top score apparently played for 58 times longer than I did. Scary. Despite the fact that the game remains (technically) playable pretty much forever, it's only fun for about a minute or two, before rapidly accelerating past frantic and into button-mashing spamfest.

Usually when I see scores this high, I assume the highscore table's been hacked, but in this case it's pretty obvious that anyone can score that high if they sink enough time into it. If I had the right macros, I could beat the top score with duct tape. The only limit is Flash's max integer value.

All that said, I like how the game never beats you over the head with failure. Grainsalt came very close to an ideal game design, here. IMHO the only problem is that the gameplay is a bit TOO streamlined. I recommend breaking the gameplay up a little bit, next time. Do five waves, then display a shop menu where the player can buy powerups. Then the next five waves, maybe there's some different gameplay rule or foreign object in the arena that changes the gameplay a bit. Maybe every hundredth stage could be a boss, I dunno. My point is, the diversity available within the game was all packed into the first few minutes of gameplay. Ideally you'd want to spread that out over the course of the game.

If the game has infinite length, you need an infinite number of permutations, sprinkled liberally over the course of the game. I attempted this (clumsily) in one of my games, and I don't recommend it. Probably Diablo II came the closest out of any game I've played, but even then it didn't truly last forever.

I guess the moral is, spread your content a little thinner next time. Don't add a time limit or a surefire lose state, but do make it an ongoing campaign with breaks, a way to save your progress, and notably different gameplay over time.

[Clockstile Takeover]

Okay premise, good graphics, horrible gameplay.

The gameplay kinda reminds me of that old Bijou Billy game for the NES. For those of you too young to remember it, that wasn't a compliment. Let's just say there's a reason Mario and Sonic are the classics and nobody's ever heard of Bijou Billy.

Unfortunately, the things that can kill you with one hit are only visible for like a split second, so the only way to beat the game is to memorize each obstacle ahead of time. That means contant pointless re-playing, dying over and over again, is the only way to advance. Reflexes and spur-of-the-moment decision-making don't factor into it.

The game could still be playable, maybe, if it was good. unfortunately, clicking on the intro movie doesn't let you skip it, which means unless you *really* like staring at text and a sloppy tomfulp sketch, you're doomed to waste 2 minutes of your life over and over again waiting for the next 30 seconds of gameplay.

Graphics during the game were good. It's just a shame about the gameplay. I never got past the first rocket guy, so who knows, maybe it's really great after that part. I'll never find out. The intro is just a deal-breaker for me.

I suggest Galathos use Math.rand() to supply the player with slower, easier challenges in less predictable places next time. True challenge comes from showing the player what obviously needs to be done, but introducing complications along the way. A game that kills you if you don't already magically know where all the trouble spots are isn't challenging, it's just a pain in the ass. Beat such a game once, and it will never challenge you again once you've cracked it.